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Rachel Dearth
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« Reply #60 on: December 17, 2007, 01:04:53 pm »

Your next story should be about an incubus, Unknown, then you can feel free to put as much sex in there as you want without any complaints about it.
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« Reply #61 on: December 17, 2007, 01:08:14 pm »

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And if I hadn't mentioned it, nobody would have commented, about the "O."


Probably not, but you'll notice that people don't tend to give specific feedback about what they do or not like about something around here unless asked for it. That is similar to even writer's forums where people tend to also give more general opinions. That is why it is best to go with your instincts as a writer first and decide whether it is working or not.  The most important thing?  Keep hammering away at a story until you are certain it works and (at least in my case) try and write the passages of a story quickly!  That way you don't have as much time to second guess your instincts and the flow is a lot better.
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« Reply #62 on: December 17, 2007, 01:29:59 pm »

Hi Rachel

I doubt if there will be another story... at least not for a very long time.

Thanks dear
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« Reply #63 on: December 18, 2007, 11:02:52 am »

Well, the sex needs to be more graphic, simple as that. 
Let's try it again, but this time really make the readers feel as if they are having the big 'o.' (or lots of little ones). Wink
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« Reply #64 on: December 22, 2007, 08:35:57 pm »

Happy Holidays, there, Unknown! 
Hope you have a good one there buddy!   Wink
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« Reply #65 on: December 23, 2007, 10:23:11 am »

Hi zodiac

Thanks and Merry Christmas!
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« Reply #66 on: December 26, 2007, 03:54:55 am »

Merry Christmas, Unknown.

To Zodiac and Pagan (each, of course being pagan-worshipping infidels), Happy Holidays. 

Sarah
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« Reply #67 on: December 28, 2007, 10:46:18 am »

Hi Sarah

So nice to see you here, dear.

Hope you had a wonderful holiday, and I wish you all the best in the New Year...

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« Reply #68 on: December 28, 2007, 05:11:48 pm »

The new story reads fine to me.

I have an idea for another one (so long as you are writing sex stories):

A guy picks up a chick in a bar, they have sex, and he finds out she's a demon.  That is usually where the story ends, right?  Not this time, the rest of the story could be about him coping with the idea that he has fallen with a demon while she wrestles with her re-emerging humanity!  Cool huh?  Wink
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« Reply #69 on: December 28, 2007, 05:30:43 pm »

Hi Ares

Glad to see you back, it is a cool idea.
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